The Lost Hero (Rewrite)
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Jason wakes up in a bus with no clue as to how he got there. Come to think of it, he doesn't know anything! His name, his mom or even his age. So when a girl with blonde shows up and threatens to judo flip him if he doesn't come with her, he figures he has no choice but to follow her and try to figure out who he is and why he feels like an outsider.
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I don't really like how Rick Riordan did the Heroes of Olympus (personal opinion). The book feels too kiddish and immature. So I wanted to rewrite it with a slightly more mature and darker tone.
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I appreciate constructive criticism but please don't make the comments a place for a hate war. Enjoy the book everyone, whether you're a mortal, demigod or an immortal (in which case, why are you even here?).
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