Dim.
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MatureOngoing<5 mins
Last published Thu, Jan 16, 2020
Cold, so very cold. The ground feels hard and smooth. The air is damp. I open my eyes, I see a thick fog or haze above me in the distance. I get to my feet quickly, and look around.
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