Forgotten Past: The Dragon's Mark [ON HOLD]

Short story about my alter ego character Alex. (For now I'm stopping at chapter 3 because I want feedback before continuting, if i do continue the story I'll be rewriting chapters 2-3 a little differently to fit a little better for more chapters. If I get enough feedback I'll write up to chapter 5 and then after more feedback will consider up to 10 chapters total. I'm also planning a second story already, about Haileys back story and who she is. I do need feedback though so please leave comments.)