"Tum Azaad panchi ho aur hamesha azaad yi rahogi"

Hi guyz here I'm with my first sukor story ...hope you will like it..I'm little nurvous rite now bcoz its my first writing and I used simple language. ..after reading plz give your feedback guyz...achcha ya bura ...agar correction ho tho bejijak batana. ...writing thoda kachcha hai ji lekin Dil tho sachcha hai ji😍 so here we go. ...👍