This is my version to help to those students who had a difficultly of constructing a sentences, paragraph, especially essay. please bare with my grammar because im not good at english. don't judge my grammar instead correct it 😊, it will be a big help. I'm not encouraging you to just copy & paste, i just wanted to give you an idea and outline to you're story and title, and make same changes in the story. P. s. it is all written by Me JKangela 😘 give some feed back 😊All Rights Reserved