The Force Awakens: Rewritten [COMPLETED]
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  • Reads 2,673
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  • Parts 16
  • Time 1h 59m
Complete, First published Jan 22, 2020
Based on Star Wars ep. VII: The Force Awakens. 

"You... you're afraid." I say looking back at him defyingly. "That you'll never be as strong as Darth Vader." I say his hand moving away from me instantly and he takes a step back finally my body gets released from his hold. 

I notice the expression from his face breaking completely, he is confused even rattled. I breathe heavily and keep staring back at him proud of myself as he picks up his mask and exits the room leaving me tied up to the interrogation chair. 

How was I able to do all of that? 

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This book is part 1 of my rewrite series. I figured that if If I wanted to rewrite TLJ and TROS the only correct way would be by also doing TFA so here is that. 

Also, this book is going to be very similar to the movie to a point where it is almost identical but since it's written with different points of views we get to know more about the characters and where they come from. It is very canon compliant especially when talking about the different character backstories. 

That being said, this doesn't mean that the next two books are going to be the exact same as the movies I want to take the other books in a completely different way. They might still have similarities to the movies but not that many. 

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**I do not own any of the characters in the Star Wars Saga all credits to that go to Lucas Films.**
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