Order of the Black Sun Part I DRAFT

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Time 1h 23m

This is the draft for the first part of my story, order of the Black Sun. I am posting it to see other people's reactions to the basic idea and story of part one. Please leave feedback.All Rights Reserved

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ORDER OF THE BLACK SUN
Sat, Jan 25, 2020

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ORDER OF THE BLACK SUN
Sat, Jan 25, 2020

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