Comatose ( part 1 )
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This is a OC fanfic about my OC Jordan, below you can find the basic info for her.
Jordan is a witch and a former street rat, she lost her parents in a fire on her 10th birthday and having no other relatives who she could live with, she had no other choice than to turn to the streets and forest of Storybrooke. Until the day Emma found her rummaging through a dumpster and took her under her protective wings, Jordan had been living in a tree house for 7 years with her stray husky Ollie who she had found out on the street. Due to Emma saving her life, Jordan look at her as her older sister.
No one knows what really happened the day Jordan's house burned down, no traces of evidence were found at the scene and so far no reports or other information of the incident have been found either. Though Jordan is happy with the life she have now, she still clings to the hope of one day finding some answers.
She wears a golden ruby ring her mother gave her at birth, it contains all her powers and without it she's powerless.
Some of Jordan's biggest weaknesses is everyone she loves ( including Ollie ), if you threaten to hurt them in anyway, you can bet your ass she'll do anything you say to keep them safe.
Her best friend and crush is Ruby, Granny's was her first and only job after Emma became her guardian and Ruby was one of few that had welcomed her with open arms and no judgment.
Her mentor is Regina, as a street rat Jordan had no control over her powers and Regina was the one who taught her how to use them without loosing control, she also taught her how to do spells and everything else she knows about magic and Jordan is very fond of her.
She's 21 and pansexual, but leans more towards women than men.
Her parents names are Ava and James Ross
NOTE: This is my first real fanfiction and this part is a test to see how it goes, if people like it, I'll continue the story.
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