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I got this idea while watching a youtube video on how to be a better writer. I realized that I honestly don't know what to do... I also realized I don't know what you guys like. This book is going to be all about our reader/author relationship. I want to get to know you all better, I want to see what's going on inside your head when you read. I want to tell me how bad or good my writing is, if I need revisions immediately or if it's almost bearable. A book is never finished, it just met its deadline.
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