Tear
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Ongoing7m
Last published Wed, Feb 12, 2020
Three middle school boys go deep into the woods. They hear a deep humming sound and follow it... Upon reaching the sound, they see a huge tear right in the ground! One kneels down to investigate and falls in! He wakes up and finds himself in another world... A dark and evil one. He finds his friends and soon learns that they are not safe there. They meet a young villager boy in the dark world. He tells them the prophecy and believes that they are the heroes of his world. How will they defeat the evil ruler from taking their world?
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