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Alina is a normal girl who's only worry is to get the boy she likes to notice her. One day when her best friend doesn't catch her bus, somebody shoots her bus driver while he is driving.
Alina's life becomes more difficult when one of the people who survived the bus crash was killed by a bullet.
As weeks go by, more and more people from the bus crash are murdered and the police are no where close to finding the killer in time.
Alina now must take matters into her own hands and follow the clues to finding this killer before it is too late.
This is my first working publish story.
Please tell what you think about it I do accpt constructive criticism.
Also the cover isn't original. It is by Andrew Wilson. Instagram @andrewwilson.
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