El Mayor de los Regalos
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Last published Wed, Feb 5, 2020
Un cuento que se me ocurrió con la frase "El mayor de los regalos". Un cuento que hice para un reto que me encomendaron y con el que quise probar para practicar la escritura. Me pasé algo con lo largo y el desarrollo de las ideas. Es por eso que decidí publicarla aquí. Disculpen como es el cuento y todo lo demás; aun estoy aprendiendo cosas en cuanto al mundo de la escritura.
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