Paul x Patrick ( from eddsworld)

Hello everyone ^^ I was bored and I wanted to write a Paul x patryck fanfiction (paul and patryck are from a webseries named eddsworld by edd gould. The credits to the characters go to the eddsworld team and the story the I have written has nothing to do with the official and original eddsworld story and serves for entertainment) . I am open to criticism but please make sense as I do not tolerate insults and since English is not my first language. Have fun at the reading^^