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Mana

Reads 145
Votes 5
Parts 5
Time 1h 41m

Reads 145
Votes 5
Parts 5
Time 1h 41m

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A magic story. Read if you want. Looking for Criticism. 

*Insert Generic Magic Description Here*All Rights Reserved

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