The Half-Witch from Hillberg (work in progress/draft)
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This is a work in progress story, that i've written a 'chapter one' for in three days (with a time of a two-three days break). If there's anything wrong with it, please, do tell me and i'll try my best to fix it, if possible. This is my very first time having an idea and sticking with it, so i'm putting it out here to have it critiqued and maybe get some advice? All positive things and nice stuff is allowed, please don't be mean. I just wanna write a story for funnsies.
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