Summer Daze

Summer Daze

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WpMetadataNoticeÚltima publicación jue, ago 14, 2014
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Romance
Summer Daze is inspired by all the books I've ever read about girls falling in love in, you guessed it, summer. But I kind of got bored with all those books following one of two basic story lines. 1: Girl meets boy, girl loses boy,girl wins boy back.2: Girl meets boy,girl and boy start to fall in love,girl and boy kiss. That was driving me crazy,so I decided to write my own book but didn't want it to go coo coo and have the couple always in fights and breaking up,those books agitate me. But I'm also writing this book to see what the public's reaction is to my stories I don't write English class that go through about a million editing processes. So leave me some comments on what you think, I'm completely open to constructive criticism (although I would love more constructive than criticism). Overall I would describe this book as a happy expiriment, seeing as how it's pleasing me that it's not a basic storyline and how it's testing my writing skills. I hope you enjoy the book! Bye!-Chloe
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***this book contains suicidal thoughts and tendencies, may not be appropriate for younger audiences*** In which she looks for the purpose of life. Lily Carter's parents died in a car crash leaving her and Laura, girl was depressed long before her parents passed away and with all the problems turning up now, Lily felt more miserable - if that's even possible. With her journey to look for life's purpose and grab the small pinch of HOPE - which is ironically her second name -, will she finally snap at the pressure and finally end it all? or will a small light lit her darkened world of grief and loneliness? * "So you know. The little goth girl who gets bullied is indeed a mess. There's this mess in her head that eats her alive everyday isn't it? What to do now Kaden? Tell the whole neighborhood and recieve an award for taking out a crazy in this world?" I spit like vomit. His eyes warmed up as I finished, "Lily. It isn't like that" "What is it then? People stopped caring... they gave up, why aren't you?" I fought my tears. "Because I feel the need to care. Did Leigh hurt you? Did she hit you?" he finally noticed the unusual redness of my cheek. I don't like the way he told me he needed to care for me. I felt like an obligation, a responsibility that he is carrying and carrying leads to getting tired and when people gets tired, they give up. I don't want them to give up on me. But they will, so it's good not to make them care for me in the first place. "I never needed anyone. I stopped needing anyone before, why start now?" I uttered the words again. Why? There is nothing to fight for. No mama. No papa. No sister to love me. No one. So why would I waste my life and the time of others to fix what is already broken - and someone who doesn't want to be fixed? If I may add. Maybe I gave up. No, scratch that. I gave up a long time ago - when my parents died, my hope and purpose went away with them.

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