This is my first ever finished short story, I would really like for some thoughts on this. So if you could tell me how you liked it in the end, I would really appreciate it.
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look this is my first story don't judge!
so I don't know exactly what's gonna be in here but yah!
enjoy! No one's gonna read this 😀
damn I suck at writing descriptions😞