Souls of the Outcast

Evan woke up in a strange place, with strange people, some with strange, almost supernatural abilities. Evan and the rest of his group are thrown immediately into a world of work or starve, contribute or be cast out, pull the trigger, or meet your maker.

After all, they aren't alone on the island. The Cloud looms, hideous, once human monsters lurking within. But something's changing the Cloud and its monsters, and not for the better. Evan must jump headfirst into his new life, or be crushed by the conflict.

SOTO is a story four very inconsistent years into the making, but by no means is anywhere near done. I'm posting to see what people think of the story, so please do comment to show your love, or maybe some criticism too. I am a busy college student, so uploads might be inconsistent as well, if enough people enjoy the story i might pick up writing again. but for now, i'm looking for feedback :)

IMPORTANT: like i said im a busy college student, ill be posting more of the story as much as i can, but just because i publish another chapter doesn't mean that's all that chapter is, more often than not ill go back and add some more later. so if you begin a newly published chapter and it picks up in an unfamiliar place, chances are there is more to read in the last chapter.