FIFTY SHADES OF GREY
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  • Parts 25
  • Time 3h 5m
Complete, First published Feb 23, 2020
Mature
This is my own twist on one of my favorite book series 'Fifty Shades Of Grey'. There will be three installments.

In my version Christian Grey childhood and back ground is mostly the same. I will be giving more detail of it through out the story through his nightmares. His life doesn't really begin to change until he meets Anastasia Steele. 

Anastasia is an African American college graduating student living with her roommate Kate. She has a loving relationship with the only man she has known as her father Ray Steele. Her and her mom Carla are not as close due to  some unresolved issues of Ana feeling discarded when she pick a man over her.

Ana and Christian meet the same way as in the official book but what how would the story change if Ana didn't just consider the contract but actually signed it. She puts in her do's and don'ts and follows the rules. How would things change if it was not just Ana catching strong feels but Christian as well.

How different would things be if it was him that was breaking all the rules from the start. He still punishes her but it is because he feels she is cheating on him. Will the punishment be to much for her to take? Or will she take it and stay with him in the end? 

All these questions and so much more will be answered in this book

ALL CHARACTERS OF THIS STORY ARE NOT OF MY OWN THEY BELONG TO THE AMAZING WRITER EL JAMES

COMPLETED 3/11/2020

JUST WENT THROUGH RE-EDITING AND ADDED A LITTLE MORE TO SOME CHAPTERS THAT I FELT WAS MISSING SOMETHING. 9/11/21
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