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As the new found leader of Ark, Marceline Sounders, a girl burdened by years of death and violence has to save everything her grandmother created. Her older sister is dead. Her older brother is broken. Her twin brother is disconnected. Her younger brother is scared. Can a she overcome her family secrets and mental issues and rise as a leader like her grandmother? Or will she succumb to a fate much worse? ------------------------------ Hello everyone, I have been working on this story for a little while now and I have some big plans for it but I want to know what you think. I have published the first three chapters of this new story and I have many more in the drafts saved, but I don't want to publish it and for nobody to like it so this is all I ask of you. To show me that you are interested, you can either comment anywhere in the story, or hit the star on the bottom of the page, I will try to write more chapters as I run out of them in drafts but I don't want to put them out if nobody likes my writing. So please help me out and let's see where this will go. Adios ✌🏻
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SOOO we obviously didn't make the deadline lol. This story is unfinished and will remain that way. This is the best example of a rushed concept with no actual plot lol. I wrote blind and hated most of what I had written. I've redesigned this concept and I'm rewriting it with a stronger concept and a laid-out plot. I will release the rewrite when it's done. I'm keeping this published so I can look back at my growth and so others can also see the transformation if they are interested. [ROUND THREE QUALIFIER] Simone's family is her life until she is called as one of the hundred winners given a chance at a new life. When Simone Moss enters the Healthy Human Dome, she is pushed into a deadly game that challenges her in every way possible. While this dark game is filled with blood, it also forces her to face her inner demons and grow in unexpected ways. "Every life you take raises the price of your own. Are you worth more than any of them?" This is my entry to the 2021 Open Novella Contest. Thank you for reading, commenting, and voting. This is my first story outside of fantasy as well as my first 3rd person story. Good or bad, I'd love to hear what you think, it'll help me grow as a writer.

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