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Judgement
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Ongoing, First published Aug 15, 2014
It's 2050, mobster and drug lord's have come and taken over parts of New York which can cause major conflict with the people, making young men and women come apart in they're gang's, but the police force have come together and gather the strong and the bold to be in the force. But only some can go in action. Lucky for this young men they got pick to go into action. They  got to they're squad, to only find out they're captain is a short, childish, bubbly and young women, but don't underestimate this girl she has a whole other side to her.

I know I might suck but can you please read it first then tell me in the comments what should I do to improve this story.
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