The Unknown { The enemy from within}
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Last published Thu, Mar 19, 2020
This story is about five girls, Greta, July, Christine, Mirabel and Chloe. They have being friends for a very long time. These five friends had fun with each other and enjoyed each other's company. Until the unexpected happened when she lost a friend, July. Things changed from bad to worst when these five friends life were at risk, as they kept on dying one after the other by a killer who they know nothing about...a killer who is unknown....a killer who knows everything about them...a killer who might not be an enemy but a friend.
What will happen when they find out that the killer is an enemy from within? Will anyone be alive to figure out who the enemy is? Who might be the killer? Find out in 'The unknown.'
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