The Runaway- Fighting for her life, and can not trust

A girl's parents get divorced when she was little, and she goes live with her father in America she doesn't like. Her mom and she have been planning for Keyshone- the little girl- to run away back to Japan. Finally, Keystone has the money and supplies to make it to Japan. She gets out of the house and starts to run away to Japan, but thing gets in her way, making her wonder if she will ever make it to Japan. Please comment You opinions about anything on the story so I can make the story better. warning: most of the chapters are really shot, but if you want I can add on to them. Just tell me your ideas, and I will work with them.