Why Lorie? Part I
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Mature Content! *** We all know all about the three Bartholy brothers: Nicolae, Peter and Drogo, and how they became vampires. But what about their little sister, Lorie? Why would Viktor Bartholy transform a six-year old girl into a blood-sucking monster? This story begins with that of Lorie's mother, Josette Lafoure, and ends in Lorie's transformation into a vampire. Enjoy!
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