It's An Ever Fixed Mark!!

It is my first story. I've tried writing short stories but I was always unable to complete them. Though I had good theme and concept I was unable to bring out as a story I was sad about it .But I just wanna try it out writing a novel it's really hard for me but I'll honestly try my level best to do it. I'm a girl but I tried writing this story in a boy's point of view. If you read it please do comment whatever you feel like saying I'll definitely correct it and thank you so much for this wonderful opportunity.And I wanna remind you that this story is purely my imagination.