Broken
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Last published Fri, Oct 17, 2014
She looks like any ordinary girl to anyone, outside her family that is. She forces a smile, a laugh, acts like anyone, but at home, she's not pretending.
Her father is usually drunk, and calling her a failure, and she doesn't know why she is a failure.
She comes home to a beating or fight, then goes to clean up the house.
Almost no emotion now. She doesn't care anymore.
Melody is broken.
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