Mary Sue Test/OC Rater
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Yo! I'm doing an oc rater! Because in this time of perpetuating pandemics, I'm stuck at home and have nothing to do other than actual work! yaayyyyyyyyyy.......
Any, feel free to share your ocs, I'm fairly harsh, i may draw some.
go.
(Also as an extra note, Im always available. Trust me. I didn't drop off. This review is Active)
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