Cold Love to a Sacred Flake

This story is about my two ocs, Frosty and Snowflake. They are ice elementals with desires of passion, fear and force. In this story also includes the relationship between siblings and best friends alike. This story might not be all that great, mainly because it's my first one lol, but I hope it at least gets some understanding criticism so I can know what is acceptable and what is not acceptable in my chapters.