My-Hime (End)

Based off the anime originally aired 2004 in Japan. Critically reviewed in the magical girl genre often as one of the most disappointing endings of all time to a set up that proved potential.

This is an attempted rewrite at the very ending to the overall plot. Spoilers are very present in this fan-fiction so I encourage any and all to view episodes 1-25 of the subbed or even dubbed content.

The narrative comes off childish and girly early on and that's because it is. It's in fact the genius of the show. Along with typical anime tropes this seemingly light-hearted viewing will touch on mature topics such as grief from extreme loss, molestation and emotional abuse.

Why I wrote this? In my personal opinion the ending did not stick thematically or conclusively. If you think about the ending for more than a minute you have a ton of unanswered questions.
I wanted to write something that connected to the rest of the series, but held the weight of the choices made from the large cast. The original ending is vexxing to many because it feels so displaced. Certain choices didn't matter, consequences don't hold to choices that did matter. I can understand why the writer sought to tell his kind of ending, but the path there felt so darn forced that he wrote himself into a farfetched corner. I really do believe that this could have been one of the fum and memorable greats along side Kill La Kill or perhaps Steins Gate.

If you enjoyed the anime and this alternate version please upvote it and post what you would change in the original ending.

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