Persona oc review
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Faith | Akira Kurusu x OC | Persona 5
(COMPLETED) Yuuen Morito is known as the "Big Sister" figure in the school. Friendly to everyone and member of the prestigious Student Council. When a certain black-haired male enters the school she is forced to be his guide and she quickly befriends him. Soon that friendship blossoms into love but how can Joker confess when he refuses to tell Yuuen anything about the Metaverse? Or what can he do when she gets trapped inside? -=-=-=- Persona 5 Protagonist x OC story I do not own any characters beside Yuuen Morito. All rights go to Atlus and the other creators of Persona 5.Complete
The thief and the princess
A faithful encounter between the princess of hell and the great Phantom thief Persona 5 x hazbin hotel. Thank you @Br1an5 for the story idea! I hope you enjoy this! WARNING SPOILERS FOR PERSONA 5 ROYAL!
Persona 5 Royal: The Ultimate Trickster
(Part 1 Of the Ultimate Trickster Series) When the Phantom Thieves' plan falls apart, Ren Amamiya pays the ultimate price. Believing their leader is gone forever, his friends set out on a desperate mission to avenge him and bring down Masayoshi Shido. But while the world mourns Joker, Ren begins a journey beyond death itself-one that will test his resolve, reshape his destiny, and forge him into the Ultimate Trickster.Complete
The Aeon Arcana
F!Reader x Goro Akechi. You have had visions and dreams of future events ever since high school started. They have progressively gotten worse, and by your third year they're unbearable. Just when you lost all hope, you start making friends in strange, coincidental circumstances. Is your luck finally looking up, or is there some kind of supernatural force at play? ❗CONTENT WARNING ❗ Due to the nature of Persona 5 and Goro Akechi's backstory and life, this fic contains triggering and adult content, including (but not an exhaustive list): Emotional Abuse, manipulation, violence/gore, su!cide, self destructive behavior, s!xual assault, torture, eating disorders, etc. Y/N has implied/referenced neglect and abuse from her parents and is mistreated. Y/N will go through distressing circumstances.Complete
Fun Persona Stories(3,4,5)
OCs x Persona characters. Ok I'll flesh it out a little more. I've made a trio of characters that you can either have represent yourself or just as is, shipping them with mainly one person. It's been quite fun honestly making these, so if you have any ideas, please, don't be shy.
The Phantom Thieves of Hearts Pt. 2
This is part two of my fan fiction series titled, "The Phantom Thieves of Hearts," which is a reformatted version of a screenplay that I wrote a couple of years ago. This part focuses on the newly formed, Phantom Thieves, changing the heart of another cruel adult, who's a famous painter named, Ichiryusai Madarame, while trying to rescue the painter's pupil, Yusuke Kitagawa, from rumored abuse and mistreatment by this very painter. "Persona 5," is a video game that means so much to me and has definitely changed my life for the better so I dedicate this series to all of the talented people working at Atlus and P-Studio for making such a life changing game. I do not own any of the characters, locations and plot points from, "Persona 5" and any of the other, "Persona," games. All characters, locations and plot points from, "Persona 5" and the other, "Persona," games belong to and are trademarked by Atlus and P-Studio. I do not own any of the music that is in this fan fiction; all music that is in this fan fiction belongs to and is trademarked by the musicians of the music that is in this fan fiction.Complete
Phantom Thieves of Hope- The Royal Viewing
When Ren woke up and saw velvet a week after coming "home", his first thought was "shit". When he sees his fellow thieves and was told by Igor and Lavensa that they'd would be watching the Journey of Phantom Thieves from another universe, he then thought "ok this won't be bad at all. Wait Sae and Sojiro are here? With Maruki, Sumire, and... Akechi!? Well at least this won't be boring. Original Fanfic from Creepercraftguy
My Inspiration (Ann Takamaki x Male Reader)
Ever since Shiho, Ann's best friend, tried to commit suicide from jumping off the school building, Ann has had many doubts fill her mind. Some of that changed when she became part of the Phantom Thieves and made her contract with her Persona to change society from the evil that truly lurks it by changing people's hearts. With the first target, Kamoshida, Ann had the feeling of revenge to get back at the man who caused so much pain to her best friend. Even after defeating Kamoshida, negative feelings still lingered within Ann's mind. She cast them aside and contunued to grow stronger for her dear friend. Her strength showed with the process of taking Madarame down. However, there was one blockde in her mind that she couldn't understand. She constantly worked on making her own heart strong, but had no luck. That was until a new transfer student came along the way and caught her attention..... This will be based upon the P5 Royal game All credits to the Atlus for the story line, I just own my persona I will make. I hope you all enjoy this one! Going to be something new and exciting!!Complete
The Phantom Thieves of Hearts Pt. 4
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Dark Sun: A Goro Akechi x Amamiya Ren Romance (Persona 5/Royal)
I have but one goal, and no one will keep me from achieving it. I will burn my stepfather, Shido, to the ground with my bare hands. In order to further this, I decide to befriend the Phantom Thieves. I spend time with them, befriend them, laugh and joke with them, and even strategize with them as we dodge in and out of Palaces, taking hearts where we please. But I never lose sight of the real reason why I'm using them. We get closer and closer, and Ren Amamiya, the leader of the group, peaks my interest. We finally become friends, and suddenly, something changes. I must choose what side to stand on, and whether or not using the Joker and his friends is still my destiny.Complete
(COMPLETED) Yuuen Morito is known as the "Big Sister" figure in the school. Friendly to everyone and member of the prestigious Student Council. When a certain black-haired male enters the school she is forced to be his guide and she quickly befriends him. Soon that friendship blossoms into love but how can Joker confess when he refuses to tell Yuuen anything about the Metaverse? Or what can he do when she gets trapped inside? -=-=-=- Persona 5 Protagonist x OC story I do not own any characters beside Yuuen Morito. All rights go to Atlus and the other creators of Persona 5.
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