Persona oc review
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Last published Fri, Apr 17, 2020
Here we look at oc's/self inserts of characters for persona and give criticism.
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The One Who Never Told | P5
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My OC list
Just some character ideas that I've been imagining on my life. But just to let you know, I don't own these photos, only some AI photos that I created!
Dark Sun: A Goro Akechi x Amamiya Ren Romance (Persona 5/Royal)
I have but one goal, and no one will keep me from achieving it. I will burn my stepfather, Shido, to the ground with my bare hands. In order to further this, I decide to befriend the Phantom Thieves. I spend time with them, befriend them, laugh and joke with them, and even strategize with them as we dodge in and out of Palaces, taking hearts where we please. But I never lose sight of the real reason why I'm using them. We get closer and closer, and Ren Amamiya, the leader of the group, peaks my interest. We finally become friends, and suddenly, something changes. I must choose what side to stand on, and whether or not using the Joker and his friends is still my destiny.Complete![𝓒𝓻𝓲𝓶𝓼𝓸𝓷 𝒎𝒆𝒆𝒕𝒔 𝓔𝓶𝓮𝓻𝓪𝓵𝓭 [𝔾𝔸𝔸ℝ𝔸 𝕃𝕆𝕍𝔼 𝕊𝕋𝕆ℝ𝕐]](https://img.wattpad.com/cover/206943711-256-k644171.jpg)
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Persona 5 Royal: New Game Plus (P5RNG+)
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