The Ark
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I am currently rewriting this book that I wrote in NaNoWriMo. I am looking to see what feedback I get for the book as I rewrite. Let me know what you guys think.
This book is about Noah, a guy in university searching for answers about his parents death. His obsession for truth will take you to a new world and galaxy to find answers, with new creatures to help Noah along the way. Overall this book is a sci-fi mystery with elements of different genres thrown in. I hope you guys like what you read!
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