The abandoned Savior
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  • Reads 489
  • Votes 9
  • Parts 10
  • Time 1h 1m
Ongoing, First published Mar 24, 2020
Mature
~Disclaimer I own none of the characters from the PJO and HOO Uncle Rick does. I may own some of the character to come. Also this is my first story and I am writing it again as I have grown a bit in my writing so I am going back at it. Also I am bad at intro so please forgive me also the average word for the chapters will be around 3000 or more so if you like long fanfics enjoy this and have fun~

      I walked to the top of half blood hill. I looked over at the place that has been my home for nearly 6 years now. I see the climbing wall and pavilion in the distance. I also see the big house of to the side. I decided to stop looking around and come to do what I have finally gotten permission to do. As I walk through camp to the Athena cabin I notice that people are glaring at me. I also notice that Leo and Nico and looking sad. I walk over to them and ask them where annabeth is. I really wouldnt go looking for her right now Perce. Leo replies. Nico agrees with him. I shrug it off and head over to the Athena cabin and knock. Malcom opens the door with a smile then sees me and drops the smile and glares at me.


   ~As I said I am not the best with writing or intros but ehhhh. Anyway this is not your average betrayal story. I have read over 200 of them well to be exact I have read 237 fanfics about percy getting betrayed. So I have spent so time trying to make a unique fanfiction. I hope you enjoy it because I have spent a minute thinking on how to redo it. And I think I have done well with this one. Anyway THIS IS NOT A CHAOS ARMY STORY NOR IS IT A REGULAR BETRAYAL STORY! Welp sorry for yelling I hope you enjoy because Persassy is a main character and so is Aethsassy aka me. Enjoy and have fun 

39th in shattered on march 27th 2020
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Commander Alpha of Chaos's Army (PJO/HOO Fanfic) Highest Ranks: #1 in Percy Jackson; #1 in PJO Percy Jackson. Savior of Olympus. Hero of the century. For a while, he's the most respected demigod out there. But it's surprising how fast things can change. Brendan, another demigod, appears and starts spreading lies about Percy and soon has the whole camp against him, except for Percy's closest friends. But soon, even they begin to have their doubts. In a turn of events, Percy runs from his home and into Chaos, becoming the commander of Chaos's army and the adopted son of Chaos. It's been 500 years, and Percy loves his new home on Chaos's planet. But, when trouble arises on Earth, Percy and his army are forced to face their pasts and Percy has to defend the ones that betrayed him. This story of betrayal, love, the everlasting bond of a family, and forgiveness filled with endless twists and turns will keep you entertained and inspired until the very end. - - - All credit goes to Rick Riordan for PJO and HoO and all of the characters, except the ones that I make up, duh! Hope you enjoy! (If you find any grammatical errors/ spelling errors/ words that just don't fit right, please leave a comment so I can fix it!) I do updates twice a week on Wednesdays and Saturdays. Enjoy!