OC Reviews and Advice No One Asked for

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Parts 7
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This is actually my second OC review book. I'm remaking it because I'm not a dumbass bitch anymore. I mean I still am, but now I'm just a slightly better writer. So yeah anyways, submit me your OC's and I will review them to the best of my ability. No bullshit, no sugar-coating. If I like something, I'll tell you. If I hate something, I'll tell you. But hey, even if I do dislike your character, it doesn't mean they're trash.  I'm not CEO of what makes a good character.  So I hope my advice will be helpful to you.
    
    Oh yeah, I'll also be including chapters  with writing and character advice because I see a lot of people on this site making the exact same mistakes and it makes me wanna shit myself. So read those if you wanna hear me go into rants about stuff in fiction that I hate. It might be entertaining.
    
    Here's some fandoms that I'm pretty knowledgeable about:
    Danganronpa
    Harry Potter
    Percy Jackson
    Avatar The Last Airbender
    BNHA
    FMAB
    HunterxHunter
    Game of Thrones
    Once Upon A Time
    The Walking Dead
    Attack On Titan
    Miraculous Ladybug (kill me)
    Warriors (haven't read them in a million years but I can give it a shot)
    Soul Eater
    Noragami
    Berserk
    Assassination Classroom
    One Punch Man
    Mob Psycho 100
    Marvel
    Star Wars
    Lord of the Rings and The Hobbit
    Stranger Things
    Breaking Bad
    Original UniversesAll Rights Reserved

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This is actually my second OC review book. I'm remaking it because I'm not a dumbass bitch anymore. I mean I still am, but now I'm just a slightly better writer. So yeah anyways, submit me your OC's and I will review them to the best of my ability. No bullshit, no sugar-coating. If I like something, I'll tell you. If I hate something, I'll tell you. But hey, even if I do dislike your character, it doesn't mean they're trash.  I'm not CEO of what makes a good character.  So I hope my advice will be helpful to you.
    
    Oh yeah, I'll also be including chapters  with writing and character advice because I see a lot of people on this site making the exact same mistakes and it makes me wanna shit myself. So read those if you wanna hear me go into rants about stuff in fiction that I hate. It might be entertaining.
    
    Here's some fandoms that I'm pretty knowledgeable about:
    Danganronpa
    Harry Potter
    Percy Jackson
    Avatar The Last Airbender
    BNHA
    FMAB
    HunterxHunter
    Game of Thrones
    Once Upon A Time
    The Walking Dead
    Attack On Titan
    Miraculous Ladybug (kill me)
    Warriors (haven't read them in a million years but I can give it a shot)
    Soul Eater
    Noragami
    Berserk
    Assassination Classroom
    One Punch Man
    Mob Psycho 100
    Marvel
    Star Wars
    Lord of the Rings and The Hobbit
    Stranger Things
    Breaking Bad
    Original Universes

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