OC Reviews and Advice No One Asked for
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This is actually my second OC review book. I'm remaking it because I'm not a dumbass bitch anymore. I mean I still am, but now I'm just a slightly better writer. So yeah anyways, submit me your OC's and I will review them to the best of my ability. No bullshit, no sugar-coating. If I like something, I'll tell you. If I hate something, I'll tell you. But hey, even if I do dislike your character, it doesn't mean they're trash. I'm not CEO of what makes a good character. So I hope my advice will be helpful to you.
Oh yeah, I'll also be including chapters with writing and character advice because I see a lot of people on this site making the exact same mistakes and it makes me wanna shit myself. So read those if you wanna hear me go into rants about stuff in fiction that I hate. It might be entertaining.
Here's some fandoms that I'm pretty knowledgeable about:
Danganronpa
Harry Potter
Percy Jackson
Avatar The Last Airbender
BNHA
FMAB
HunterxHunter
Game of Thrones
Once Upon A Time
The Walking Dead
Attack On Titan
Miraculous Ladybug (kill me)
Warriors (haven't read them in a million years but I can give it a shot)
Soul Eater
Noragami
Berserk
Assassination Classroom
One Punch Man
Mob Psycho 100
Marvel
Star Wars
Lord of the Rings and The Hobbit
Stranger Things
Breaking Bad
Original Universes
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