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OC Reviews and Advice No One Asked for

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This is actually my second OC review book. I'm remaking it because I'm not a dumbass bitch anymore. I mean I still am, but now I'm just a slightly better writer. So yeah anyways, submit me your OC's and I will review them to the best of my ability. No bullshit, no sugar-coating. If I like something, I'll tell you. If I hate something, I'll tell you. But hey, even if I do dislike your character, it doesn't mean they're trash.  I'm not CEO of what makes a good character.  So I hope my advice will be helpful to you.

Oh yeah, I'll also be including chapters  with writing and character advice because I see a lot of people on this site making the exact same mistakes and it makes me wanna shit myself. So read those if you wanna hear me go into rants about stuff in fiction that I hate. It might be entertaining.

Here's some fandoms that I'm pretty knowledgeable about:
Danganronpa
Harry Potter
Percy Jackson
Avatar The Last Airbender
BNHA
FMAB
HunterxHunter
Game of Thrones
Once Upon A Time
The Walking Dead
Attack On Titan
Miraculous Ladybug (kill me)
Warriors (haven't read them in a million years but I can give it a shot)
Soul Eater
Noragami
Berserk
Assassination Classroom
One Punch Man
Mob Psycho 100
Marvel
Star Wars
Lord of the Rings and The Hobbit
Stranger Things
Breaking Bad
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50 Wordless Ways to Say "I Love You" by criticalerr0r

I basically used a prompt list and wrote out 50 shipping or platonic drabbles. Ship drabbles are marked with (character x character) while platonic are marked with (character & character). Fair warning, these are probably going to be really short. These are also kinda old. Just getting that out of the way. Also, when I use the Re:Birth characters, I'm following Miwashiba's order, but I'm using the Voices order for the Birth:Right (genderswapped) characters. The prompt list I'm using is by 50-item-writing-prompts on tumblr! Cover art credit: DRA_asu on twitter Also on AO3 under the same name! Danganronpa series belongs to Kodaka and Spike Chunsoft Super Danganronpa Another 2: The Moon of Hope and the Sun of Despair belongs to Linuj Danganronpa Re:Birth belongs to Miwashiba Danganronpa Birth:Right belongs to Danganronpa Re:Birth Voices Happy reading!

BakugouxReader: Only You ✔️(NEEDS EDITING) by LuvliMochi

You were living an everyday life at UA when you meet Bakugou and he helps you unfold the dark and painful events happening outside of school. Can you open up Bakugou's heart? Will he show his sweet side? Warning, this story deals with sadness, child abuse, mature scenes, and the feels. Watch at your own risk. 30 Chapters Total + 6 OVAs ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ 🧡 #1 in Bakugou x Reader 🧡(May 2018) 💛 #1 in BakugouKatsuki 💛(June 2018) 🧡 #2 myheroacademiafanfic 🧡(Janurary 2020) 💛 #5 kingexplosionmurder 💛 (Janurary 2020) 🧡 #4 Myheroacademiafanfic 🧡 (March 2020) ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Basic xreader Reference ~First name F/N ~Last Name L/N ~Your Name Y/N(normally first and rarely full name) ~Eye Color E/C ~Hair Color H/C ~Favorite Color F/C ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ (sorry I am not the best at descriptions) All characters rightfully belong to the creator of bnha

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Complete Opposites | BakuDeku ✔ by SmartyNadiny

─── complete ღ WARNING: fetus writing ⤷ 𝐈𝐙𝐔𝐊𝐔 admired his childhood friend Bakugou for the longest time, to the point where he fell in love with not only his quirk but him in general. They both face difficult changes along the road, making their relationship stronger than before. What will their relationship become in the end? ❱ Quirks ❱ Mature Content [M] ❱ Light Smut/Fluff [LS/Lf] ❱ Cursing ❱ Love Rivals ❱ Drama Published November 12th, 2018 Completed July 28th, 2020 Edited tbd ©SmartyNadiny Highest Rankings ღ #2 bakugouxmidoriya #3 katzuku #5 katsukixizuku #8 boyxboyromance #10 quirkau #15 bromance

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