11 parts Complete Join Kael Ganton, a son of nobility, as he thirsts for vengeance, tries to humble himself, and battles the world during a shift of power and balance.
-Test run to help my character development skills
-Leftover 'scrapped' story from the 6th grade. It was a good concept. Lousy writing, though. That was only 2 years ago. My, I've improved. I reworded and re-edited it to make it first person and added better descriptions to the Prologue (the only part I wrote in the 6th grade)
-I realize my number 1 problems (story-wise) is A) suspense and B) dullness
-Meant to be a short story. I'd love it to be a nice, looooooong good one, though.
-I like to think that my vocabulary could use some work. It used to be top-notch. Could it be that it actually deteriorated?
-20 minutes on cover(would've taken longer had I not already pre-drawn the boy from a year ago. Just had to modify and color)