Where Does His Loyalty Lie?
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  • Reads 10,936
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  • Parts 13
  • Time 2h 27m
Ongoing, First published Mar 28, 2020
Previously known as 'It was the Fatal Flaw That Killed him'


(Not like your average chaos story)
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 "'The Crooked one returns for the forgotten praetor,
The Olympians shall combine with the armies of the Creator.
Angel or Storm can save or kill time,
But no good or evil can stop the crime.
And helped by the one called 'traitor'"
     
     This prophecy leads the betrayed one to return to his homeland, "EARTH".The land full of misery, betrayal, pain for the demigods ( children of gods). 
     The Olympians have requested for chaos and order to send their army in helping them. 
Kronos is rising again after 3 millennia and has ally that Olympus cant defeat. Rising of Gaea has increased too.
     But this time the titan of time and harvest is not only after Olympus but after their lost possession. The one they lost. The one that was powerful enough to defeat  Olympians. They were too oblivious to notice that one demigod cannot change their fatal flaw. 
       STORM. The commander of the Chaos army, strong enough to defeat the Olympians single-handed, intelligence even Athena cant withdraw. The powerful,almighty, intelligent storm lets nobody in except the ones he trust. He has to return to the place where he broke.
Hated himself too much so he changed himself. 
   
    The once happy,joyful  Percy Jackson died 3 millennia ago and has reborn as storm.
And he has to save the planet who shattered his glass ball and broke him. 
    Percy Jackson returns to Earth as Storm.
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Disclaimer: *I do not own the characters of the PJO and HOO at ALL. All belongs to our uncle Rick ( Rick riordian). Some characters are made up by me and belongs to me Only. Just cause this is a chaos story  does NOT mean i have copied some other stories. The plot is original and is created by me*.
(If u think i have copied some part i have written in this book,feel free to pm me or add in the comments!)
   Might be cringe*
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