The Vampire King's Last Slave

"I want this one" he says. I look through the door of my cage to see which poor slave was chosen, only to see a set of cold, dark eyes staring back at me. My blood freezes.

"But sire...sh-shes known to be diso-obedient" the store owner stutters. The creature smiles, showing off his sharp fangs.

"Good. I look forward to breaking her"

For first time since I came here, I felt true terror take over my entire body.

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This is my first book. Please understand that it might go to fast and might be kinda short. I really want it to turn out as good as possible, so constructive criticism is encouraged. But please remember I'm a human being with feelings, so please reread your comment before you post it.

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