Hero's Journey- Creative Writing Class
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Last published Tue, Mar 31, 2020
This is the first draft of my 'Hero's Journey' for my creative writing class, It is a story about a girl named Luca Couture, it's set roughly in the Mafia era in France. This is just a first draft and any critisism is accepted. There may be quite a few mistakes, but if people like this story, I may post more the stories I've written in my creative writing class.
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