"Hard to Get?" Alternate Ending
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Hello reader,
My dear friend Ashley wrote a One Direction fanfiction about Louis Tomlinson. When I was reading it, I loved it. And then the ending happened, and I was ready to kill my best friend. (Don't get me wrong here. Some people might be okay with it, but I was not. Go make your own judgment with her story first so I don't give you any spoilers!)
So, instead of murdering the one most special friend I have, I decided to write an alternate ending to "Hard to Get?" here, containing only one part: the epilogue. I did the best I could to match her writing style, but it was hard. And by the way, if you haven't read her story yet, I highly recommend you do before proceeding to read this. The link is below!
http://www.wattpad.com/story/5818221-hard-to-get-louis-tomlinson-fan-fic
Update: she has since deleted her account, so I guess you'll just be stuck with this ending and the rest of the events preceding this to your imagination.
Enjoy reading (seriously),
Stephanie :) aurorallycrowned
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