22 parts Complete MatureTamsin had everything she ever wanted, or everything she'd always thought she'd wanted. She had money, prospects, family, and her dream fiance. One night, she loses one, then another, until everything she'd ever treasured slips through her fingers. Everything she had been certain of soon becomes unknown, but with the help of a bad but beautiful stranger, she soon sees that what she has feared may be what is the best thing for her. "All of my life I have been parading myself around as a completely Type A personality, but it's a big, fat lie. I'm Type A by force. I'm Type A because it is what has been expected of me for twenty-four years. And I've accepted that. My life has been so meticulously scheduled, organized, and managed that it has only been fair to follow suit. I list everything so that I don't err and look a fool, my house is always spotless so that I am not caught out by unexpected guests, and if nothing else, I can at least appear to be on top of things by making sure my appearance is nothing less than perfect. It's exhausting. I may have the energy to continue with this lie but I lack the motivation. I don't want this life as much as I once did and with the prospect of a new life on the horizon I'm finding myself caring less and less about what is expected of me. And I can't help but think that's all because of him." Perfect On Paper is a novel I have had on file for a long time, well over a year, and while I love it, I've never felt it right to publish. I'm hoping I'll find help here to tweak it, or in the worst case, scrap it. I welcome (beg) feedback and criticism! And I will gladly repay the favour. Many thanks.