The one fateful night
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Complete Thu, Aug 21, 2014<5 mins
Hey guys, so this is my first story and I wrote it after my girlfriend gave me the prompt 'It was cold' and this is what I came up with. Please give constructive criticism so I can improve. Enjoy :)
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