Rush
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Can you really put your past heartbreak behind you? Or will it haunt you forever?
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"Rush" was originally a shorter story I wrote back in 2007. Back then, I wrote in a more clipped, glib style which worked for me at that time. Revisiting the work, though, I find myself looking for more exposition, more discovery, more roundness from my characters. I've decided to rewrite the entire work to make it longer, more explanatory, more insightful.
English with a smattering of Filipino.
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