Broken (temporary title)
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  • Parts 11
  • Time 31m
  • Reads 191
  • Votes 32
  • Parts 11
  • Time 31m
Ongoing, First published Aug 22, 2014
WARNING: THIS STORY CONTAINS CURSE WORDS. If you aren't ok with that, I'm not forcing you to read. I just felt that the words were necessary for some characters. 

Also, the title is temporary. So is the cover. 

OK, so I wrote this story a very long time ago, and it's horrible, but I'm trying to edit it along the way. It really, truly is horrible, but it's whole, so hopefully I'll take less time to update than I do with my other stories. You can comment or PM me about any mistakes if you want to, I don't mind!!!! Actually, I'd love that!

Ok, so the "summary"...

The story is written in the point of view of almost-thirteen-year-old Savanna Tarsay. She has a twin sister named Sahara and an older brother named Striker. 

That's about all I could say. I'm probably going to change it so much that the old summary wouldn't fit anymore. 

Also, if it sucks, feel free to let me know so I could either revise, restart, or delete it!! Thanks!!!!
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