Don't Look Back(?)
  • MGA BUMASA 288
  • Mga Boto 55
  • Mga Parte 4
  • Oras 41m
  • MGA BUMASA 288
  • Mga Boto 55
  • Mga Parte 4
  • Oras 41m
Ongoing, Unang na-publish Apr 09, 2020
ON HOLD FOR NOW BCUZ IM LAZY

Seventeen year old Sal Dalton has always had a rough life. Her father died when she was very young, her mother becoming clinically depressed and unmotivated as time went on. Sal had to grow up quickly to help provide for her sister and mother, emotionally and financially. Just when she's trying to see the light and get her life together, though, Sal recieves a phone call that breaks her heart and ruins her future plans. Her emotions running wild, an ability is unveiled Sal didn't know she possessed. The ability to move and manipulate things with her mind... but there's a catch. She can't control it. She doesn't understand it. It scares her.

Sal must leave home for a while, she realizes. Not much is clear but with a little assistance, things may not be as hopeless as she previously thought.

After that call nothing went right.

After that call her life changed forever.

Sal soon meets people who understand her, who can possibly help her out. After what she did, though, Sal isn't sure she can even trust herself. Will she continue to fall apart? Or will she learn how to control her power before it gets out of hand again?


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(Title isn't exactly chosen lol... comment title suggestions, I guess?:))

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Hey so I started this around a year ago and picked it up again when I found it some months back. All I had done was the first chapter so I apologize if some things seem off, I forget about a certain detail like the main's glasses, etc.

I'm 100% not a professional writer, so don't expect perfect. I don't write nearly enough to update every week, therefore have no clue how consistent updates will be. Sometimes I'll go months without doing a thing, so... sorry?

Also, THIS IS MY FIRST DRAFT as well as my plotting. I don't plot well, just have a general idea of what'll happen and run with it. If I ever finish this story, that's when I'll begin fixing things and improving the plot, descriptive-ness, etc. <3
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