(A try at putting my stories out on her)

Its a try so if its bad please give me feedback so when i go back and edit it I can easily fix it according to your feedback.
But this is a love story with a character named Neve she is about 5'4 and she has dark skin that is smooth and soft as silk, and she has her hair as white as snow, and she has eyes like ice, and her body is curvy, and she is 17.
The two men are Chris and Jackson, Chris is only 5'10 has blond hair he constantly keeps in a man bun, and he has warm honey colored eyes, as well as he is muscular but he is also skinny, but he is lean, and he is tanned and tones and he has piercings on his nose and ears and maybe on his manhood, and he has always been very nice and warm but don't get him mad, and he is a werewolf at the age of 18,and Jackson is 6'0 and he has black hair and jade green eyes and skin like porcelain, and he is very calm and he is often cold and blunt with people and he is a werewolf as well at the age of 19.