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HM's Critiques

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First Love, The Sinner & The Saint by LouLeigh481

Have you ever felt like life wasn't enough, like you were going through the motions day in, day out, all you wanted was a change. Well one day I woke up and made that change, I was no longer the well behaved boy that did as he was told, I was a new person and I wanted to do things my way. I wanted to do what made me feel alive, even if that was murder of innocent people, I wanted to grab someone and watch the life drain out of their faces, it pleased me.. it made me feel alive. This is my story of heartbreak and turmoil, friends lost and friends gained, families torn apart by my needs. This is my life, and I'm proud to be the man I am. Dated created 9th August 2020 Date completed 15th August 2020 Word count 50,000-60,000

Mackenzie's Critique Shop by UnidentifiedIsHere

[PERMANENTLY CLOSED] Want a genuine reader and helpful critiques? In this shop, I offer you helpful advice and outlook on your book, all while commenting and voting! I try my best to read everything in your story, and provide as helpful outlooks on it as I can. Check inside for more details. ... [] OPEN [] CLOSED FOR CATCH UP [] HIATUS [!] PERMANENTLY CLOSED

My Spiritual Awakening Diary by _ayannaxo

I consider this my digital diary where I can express my feelings, thoughts, and life experiences during this spiritual awakening. I've been divinely guided to share this insight, which you may find helpful in your journey too. This diary will include journal entries about spirituality, holistic practices, grounding techniques, energy vampires, narcissism, karmic soulmates, empaths, astrology, manifestation, herbalism, crystals, chakras, tarot, psychic abilities, self-love, feelings of being lost in life, mental health, movie/show spiritual interpretations, late stage capitalism and the effects of patriarchy, among other topics. Stick around if you're interested in any of these subjects. I look forward to your feedback on my writing! Feel free to keep up with the latest updates on my tiktok page @TheFlowerSeer117

Sally Face X Reader // Oneshots And Lemons by Riikira

|Originally published in 6/13/19| |Republished in 6/15/19| ×Ranks× #15 in SallyFaceFanfics 6/14/19 #146 in SallyFace 6/16/19 #2 in Nockfell 6/27/19 Thanks for 200+ reads!! 6/23/19 Thanks for 1.26k reads! 7/20/19 #1 in Nockfell 72019 Thanks for 1.61k 72719 Thanks for 1.69k 73019 Thank you for 2.04k !♡ August 5, 2019 Tysm for 46k+ 8/3/2020 Thank you all so much for 400k :) , June 25, 2023

He Taught Me How To Find Myself by GabbyBhengu

"You did Maths Ada, and you're smart. Langa and you are so fucking negative. Two negatives make a positive, so like I said, you two deserve each other" ●°○°●°○°●°○°●°○°●°○°●°○°●°○°●° I always lived my life the way people wanted me to live it. After watching "The Princess Diaries" I realized that my life was controlled, I've been told how to live it. One day I decided to break the rules, I also wanted to feel the adrenaline they described in books. I was sick of living in someone else's story through books, it was now the time to create my own. ...who knew that all it took to finding yourself was a cute waiter at "Vue Sur l'océan"

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My articles from 2021 by arthur99999999

my articles from 2021 if there are typos or missing commas or incorrect information tell me and if you use my Articles tell me. G-rated its from bad to good articles btw the cover isn't mine it's from @TomHollandsEyebrow28 i think that's how you spell it update: I'm lazy so this book is completed

Gardenia: A Review Shop by -Chrysalis_Realm

✿﹒Welcome to Gardenia: A Review Shop! ﹒ㄑ Get custom reviews to help your book gain the acknowledgment it deserves. With our well-experienced reviewers, you will have the best opportunity to learn from your own writing and earn feedback that will last you a lifetime. Whether it's a novel you've been sitting on for months, or something you've brewed for years, our reviewers are here to help! Get a review now and learn your strengths and weaknesses! Graphics by: @ReynaBennett Credits to: @-yunsnte, @dead_poet_7 **This work is not affiliated with Wattpad.**

The Standouts - A Critique Contest by PAULAPDX (Summer 2019 Edition) by paulapdx

🛑 - CLOSED until 2021. ***If you're interested in my critiques, you might want to check out my weekly newsletter for opportunities to get a personalized critique. https://paula.substack.com/p/coming-soon Does your work stand out in an overly-crowded landscape? Does your story & writing shine as far as: ★ - Concept ★ - Voice ★ - Storytelling The Standouts is a fun, but hopefully helpful contest that can give you a sense of whether your story resonates with someone who's got some experience under her belt. Great! But who are you to judge? Fair question. This is not to humble-brag, but I've been critiquing and have worked with story development for quite some time, and I've picked up a lot along the way. ☙ - As an Ambassador, I work on content projects. ☙ - If you look at my profile, you'll see everything I've published so far has managed to standout in one way or another, whether by leading me to become a Wattpad Star; or by winning a Watty (twice!); or by being picked as a Top 10 in major Wattpad contests (twice!); or being featured. All I'm saying is I'm no slouch. I'm not brilliant either. But I've got some experience around what can catch an agent, editor, or judge's eye, and I'd like to share that with the community. ☙ - In another lifetime, I used to work for HBO in Development and at ICM (the talent agency) in their writers' department which means I understand how professionals quickly gauge whether or not they'll take a closer look at a work and/or make an offer. This kind of insight can be helpful if you're planning to submit your work or even just want to stand out more here on Wattpad. ☙ - I used to provide critiques for three writers, all of them traditionally published. They seemed to value my insight. Read the RULES, LOGISTICS & PRIZES chapter for guidelines. All entries get a brief assessment of their first chapter, with winners getting more extensive critiques. Sound interesting? Give it a go! 😊

EN's Book Reviews by ellinoom

OPEN ❎ HIATUS ❎ CLOSED ✅ May 19, 2023 - September 8, 2023 #1 Critique🏅 #7 Book Reviews🏅 #8 Feedback🏅 #21 Community🏅 Looking for feedback on your work? You're in the right place! Hello, I'm Elli Noom, a writer and avid reader. I'm also a beta reader on another platform. I offer to read your book and provide both subjective and objective feedback. You can choose to have your novels reviewed here in EN's Book Reviews or receive feedback through DM, whichever you prefer. For English and Filipino Novels only.

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First Love, The Sinner & The Saint

Have you ever felt like life wasn't enough, like you were going through the motions day in, day out, all you wanted was a change. Well one day I woke up and made that change, I was no longer the well behaved boy that did as he was told, I was a new person and I wanted to do things my way. I wanted to do what made me feel alive, even if that was murder of innocent people, I wanted to grab someone and watch the life drain out of their faces, it pleased me.. it made me feel alive. This is my story of heartbreak and turmoil, friends lost and friends gained, families torn apart by my needs. This is my life, and I'm proud to be the man I am. Dated created 9th August 2020 Date completed 15th August 2020 Word count 50,000-60,000