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Lyon is a young, trainee manticore. He is the heir to become the next leader of his tribe, but there is a glaring problem. He can't fight. For his whole life, Lyon has refused to hurt people - even in training. His father, Lucas, refuses to accept him for this; Lyon's mother, Eris, tries to support her son as best she can. But with almost daily broken bones, a weak body and a drifting mind, Lyon will eventually become something entirely different.

Hey there! This is the backstory of my character, Lyon. I recently came back to Wattpad and have been meaning to write this up. I want some constructive criticism on my writing as I am young and am still learning.
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