Don't Try To Define Me.

The story is really different, instead of Tris being small, she's taller and curvier. The story twists in a lot of different ways, Al does not kill himself. Tris only has one fear, and that's intimacy. I really haven't seen any stories like this one, so I decided to try it. If you don't like it this way, don't read it. I also changed the fighting, Tris fights Molly first then loses. She faces Peter next and kicks his ass, out of rage of course. I don't own anything, characters all belong to Veronica Roth.