Adlai Galia
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Adlai Galia is a story written for my writing class however, I will also be sharing this on here for feedback, and for those who want to read a new short story.
Adlai Galia is a story set in the Mesopotamia time during 642 BC - 562 BC with the life of Asa'u Lehim, and Jakob-Bahktun, which is set in the Babylonian Empire.
When Asa'u, travelling back to his master's house after a week's journey in acquiring produce from the market place in Kish, meets a stranger who would soon change his life. And this stranger named Jakob proposed unto him because he loved his beauty which was famed throughout the lands. When taking him back to where he was headed, Babylon, the city where he lived in, comes a tragic story between these two lovers ultimately ending in tragedy.
Written in the approach of the old English literature found in the King James Bible, biblically influenced, and biblically inspired.
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