My Breaking Dawn: A Breaking Dawn Rewrite

My Breaking Dawn: A Breaking Dawn Rewrite

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Hello readers! I am rewriting Breaking Dawn the way I think it should have been written. I began this on my Tumblr, @ iamtwilighttrash . To preface, please note that in my Twilight universe: 1) Jacob and Bella were never anything more than friends. In New Moon, they were nothing more than brother/sister-ish friends. In Eclipse, Jake and Edward actually became good friends, and he was ecstatic to hear about the wedding. (NO KISS EVER OCCURRED) 2) Angela is more present in Bella's life. This is very important to me. 3) Edward and Bella have basically the same relationship: he still left her in New Moon, they're still the classic/mushy/everlasting romance type, etc. BUT they also are young, they have more fun with one another, and Bella knows how to hold her own a little bit. 4) Bella is much more integrated into Cullen life/family. She, Jasper, and Emmett are closer, and there is no tension between her and Rosalie after Eclipse. 5) Edward does not buy Bella a new car. I like her truck, and so does she, and Jacob and Rosalie are around to fix it up. 6) Please assume that Charlie found out about the engagement in the same way as in the original. I don't feel like rewriting that, and I thought that it fit the narrative well. 7) Jacob has long hair. This might seem insignificant, but it isn't, and it means something to me. Anyway, I'm going to jump right in! I hope you enjoy my Breaking Dawn. (Stephenie Meyer OBVIOUSLY owns these characters and the saga. I'm just adding my creative aesthetic spin to it. Some elements will be incredibly similar in wording to the original, but for the most part I am entirely rewriting it)
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When Renee left Charlie he was so lost in his heartbreak. He did what many red blooded men have done. He drank to forget her. While drunk he slept with someone he'd just met and she fell pregnant. She died during childbirth and so was born Bella's half sister. Only this woman wasn't human. She was a legend in Asian culture. Her daughter will be just what the Quileute Pack needs, what Bella and Charlie will need, and the Cullen's. She will bring peace. In my story there will be no bashing. I don't do that. I like empowering. Also, Bella and Edward aren't mates. In my imagination supernatural mates can't be apart from each other. Which would explain Bella's reaction but not Edward's ability to leave her. So, no they're not mates. I'll be playing their destiny out differently. Paul Lahote is Rosa's mate who is Bella's half sister. Rosa will be the same age as Jacob as she's obviously younger than Bella. I'll have Jacob and her at 17, Bella 18, as is Paul. I didn't want too much of an age gap so that my protagonist can turn 18 soon and thus it'll be ok for these two to be together. I'll be changing the time line up to fit my story so things won't happen as they did or might not even happen at all. And as always, Twilight plots and characters belong to Stephanie Meyer. But the things I plot that aren't from her books or any characters I create such as my protagonist belong to me. Also, credit to Jeff Davis and Christian Taylor as I borrowed something from a specific character in Teen Wolf. Won't say what, you have to read to know. 🤷‍♀️

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