Hello readers! I am rewriting Breaking Dawn the way I think it should have been written. I began this on my Tumblr, @ iamtwilighttrash . To preface, please note that in my Twilight universe:
1) Jacob and Bella were never anything more than friends. In New Moon, they were nothing more than brother/sister-ish friends. In Eclipse, Jake and Edward actually became good friends, and he was ecstatic to hear about the wedding. (NO KISS EVER OCCURRED)
2) Angela is more present in Bella's life. This is very important to me.
3) Edward and Bella have basically the same relationship: he still left her in New Moon, they're still the classic/mushy/everlasting romance type, etc. BUT they also are young, they have more fun with one another, and Bella knows how to hold her own a little bit.
4) Bella is much more integrated into Cullen life/family. She, Jasper, and Emmett are closer, and there is no tension between her and Rosalie after Eclipse.
5) Edward does not buy Bella a new car. I like her truck, and so does she, and Jacob and Rosalie are around to fix it up.
6) Please assume that Charlie found out about the engagement in the same way as in the original. I don't feel like rewriting that, and I thought that it fit the narrative well.
7) Jacob has long hair. This might seem insignificant, but it isn't, and it means something to me.
Anyway, I'm going to jump right in! I hope you enjoy my Breaking Dawn.
(Stephenie Meyer OBVIOUSLY owns these characters and the saga. I'm just adding my creative aesthetic spin to it. Some elements will be incredibly similar in wording to the original, but for the most part I am entirely rewriting it)