Cursed

What would you do if you woke up different? Not a good different and not a bad different either. Your eyes that were once a unflattering brown is now an intoxicating green. You don't now what to do or if you want this to change or not. You have power and can make people do what you want. Your finally on top of the world. This is going to kill her or save her, but it was going to change her life forever.

Check this story out, I'm a beginning writer and I need critics. Thanx.